by Dark Kitten Sep 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
It has all gone wrong with one final breath, |
by Sole
Well worded indeed - great message . . . Does a little more than scratch the surface, and the flow is awesome. Excellent write. |
Sad poem.. but its very well worded.. well done |
by Carmen
Believe it or not, this is the first 9/11 poem i've read, and it was good. 5/5 |
Wow this is excellent...so sad...5/5 |
by Justin
Aww thats so sad, but again well written, you expressed your emotions really good, and I liked it alot, had a great flow and was worth reading, I can't believe there wasn't any comments.. great job, 5/5 |