Hidden from view

by Kurt   Sep 15, 2005


I see you standing with him

His hands around your hips

And the smile that played upon your lips

Everyone sees how happy you'd be

Everyone except me

As your friend i never got a chance

I never even had the courage to ask you to dance

All the things i've never said to you

All the things i'd be willing to do

Everything that is written down

In a place hidden from view

I just want you to know

That everything i wrote it true.

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  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow, thats really good. I see theres a pattern in most of your poems, that you kinda grieve over not doing something and losing the girl. Which i kinda like, because I basically write over losses. Thats mostly what i read in poetry, dark-sad poems. They are much more interesting then cheerful ones. Hope all is well.

    -Jennifer.

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    That is sad. Good Writing. Be strong, Stay strong and Take Care.