That is sad. Good Writing. Be strong, Stay strong and Take Care.

Wow, thats really good. I see theres a pattern in most of your poems, that you kinda grieve over not doing something and losing the girl. Which i kinda like, because I basically write over losses. Thats mostly what i read in poetry, dark-sad poems. They are much more interesting then cheerful ones. Hope all is well.

-Jennifer.