I like it! its very different and although its written in a way 2 easily understand..theres something bout it i just dont get! but that can be good! hehe...nice work

Amazing job. i really liked this one also. Like alot. To me this one was like it's okay to smile it's great to be happy and don't worry your not alone. Then others in this poem is like the over due death was like you haven't commit your crime maybe life is holding you inside and your not ready and don't want to because you have so much things to do here. Also your dreams are wonderful to give up your life. To me that's what i thought and there's so much more but i wanna read more of your poems because your very talented. and i really love your work. You did an amazing job once again keep it up. keep on writing .love always and forever.