by Brittney Follett Sep 15, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
I follow him silently |
I liked the edited one way better |
I love this poem the best out of all the ones i had to leave a comment on so far, 10/10 |
by Jackie Marie
Wow, hun. Excellent job on both versions. The little changes did a lot for the new poem. It has a nice flow and nice choice of words. Keep it up!! Looking forward to reading more in the future. |
by Robie Lincer
WOW the 1st one and second were amazing little changes in the second but good work! you have the talent, and it was long but the flow left me reading more and more :D |
by Aline
WOW again 5/5 m happy u may be one of my favorites. well hope so :) i didt find the other poem want me to read |