Angel of Darkness

by Brittney Follett   Sep 15, 2005


I follow him silently
through the shadows i hide
my eyes examine him quietly
as he thinks of how i died....

His memories of us
together in the past
washed away like dust
oh how time has flown fast....

He stop in an alley looking at the ground
quietly i creep toward him
he spins quickly around
his face in pain brightened by the moon...

he opens his mouth
to says something unclear
my heart comes out
it swiftly dissolves his fear...

I take his face and kiss him gently
then i drift back toward the dark
he claims his voice and says quietly
"I love you and you still bare my mark."

I touch my chest hand above my heart
a tear rolls slowly down my cheek
i turn back around and face him in the dark
i scream at him, "I'M NO LONGER WEAK!"

He gets pissed and i turn my back
he yells and cries as he sees me
grow black wings from my back
"You never wanted me to be
what i really am you just care
that i was your doll to show me off."

I take out my knife
walking toward the source
he runs for his life
"I WANT A DIVORCE!"
he screams at me...

I laugh and say with a grin
"I am not your wife
and i have never been."
then i took his life.....

Now his soul is mine
he is my slave forever
i have his mind
and he will never
have light to shine
upon me not ever
for i am the divine one..

The chosen to lead
the demons of hell
i have no more greed
just to save and sell
the angels i kill..

My New Version

I follow him silently
through the shadows i hide
my eyes examine him quietly
as he thinks of how i died....

His memories of us
together in the past
washed away like dust
oh how time has flown fast....

He stops and gazes at the ground
quietly i creep toward him
he spins quickly around
his pain is clear as his sin

he opens his mouth
to says something unclear
my angers comes out
it swiftly increases his fear...

I take his face in my hands
and look into his eyes
my love is just a piece of sand
it has no worth to him

I touch my chest hand above my heart
a tear rolls slowly down my cheek
he stabbed me in the dark
but now i am no longer weak.

He knows hes gonna die
as black wings grow from my back
hes sorry now, i see it in his eyes
he pulls out a sack.

in the sack, is my body
i dont even recognize it.
im going to tear him apart
bit by little bit

I take out my knife
he falls back in horror
he runs for his life
the hate shines in my aura

I laugh and say with a grin
"I am not your wife
and i have never been."
then i took his life.....

Now his soul is mine
he is my slave forever
i have his mind
and he will never
have light to shine
upon me not ever
for i am the divine one..

The chosen to lead
the demons of hell
i have no more greed
just to save and sell
the angels i kill..

Copyright Brittney Follett

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  • 17 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    I liked the edited one way better

  • 18 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    I love this poem the best out of all the ones i had to leave a comment on so far, 10/10

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Wow, hun. Excellent job on both versions. The little changes did a lot for the new poem. It has a nice flow and nice choice of words. Keep it up!! Looking forward to reading more in the future.

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    WOW the 1st one and second were amazing little changes in the second but good work! you have the talent, and it was long but the flow left me reading more and more :D

    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Aline

    WOW again 5/5 m happy u may be one of my favorites. well hope so :) i didt find the other poem want me to read

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