I think my best poem so far is Warped and Twisted check it out

Another awsume poem

WOW again 5/5 m happy u may be one of my favorites. well hope so :) i didt find the other poem want me to read

WOW the 1st one and second were amazing little changes in the second but good work! you have the talent, and it was long but the flow left me reading more and more :D

keep it up!

Wow, hun. Excellent job on both versions. The little changes did a lot for the new poem. It has a nice flow and nice choice of words. Keep it up!! Looking forward to reading more in the future.

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I love this poem the best out of all the ones i had to leave a comment on so far, 10/10

I liked the edited one way better