Wow, that was powerful, an unlikely structure but that just made me enjoy it more, it really captured me, well done

Hey sweety
i love this poem but at the same time it worries me alil..
i want u to remember ur not alone okie..
well another great poem by u..
as always much better than a 5
Keep writting=)

Captivating...haunting....That was so good. The structure was something different from what I usually see but it worked. It was very, very well written and had a powerful word choice. Excellent and amazing work.
~The Bleeding Child

Hey I love this poem, cool how it flows so well without even rhyming the whole time. I can never do that..but anyways, I especially liked the first 2 stanzas..great job! and thanks for your comments on mine..I know it's been a while sorry it took so long to get back to you

I think there is a very message with the words that you write! Keep up the great work...thanks for also commenting on my poem!

OOPs forgot to add the wors POWERFUL ......sorry