I liked it..nice flow..i cant retate to this poem..makes a lot of secne to me..ah i cant spell right now..forgive me..but the poem..was on of the beat i read ina whils on this site..and for thats 5/5 *muah*

Utterly amzing....

5/5.... its written very well... but u can do some rephrasing here & there...
pls do check my poem "murder or suicide"
pls vote & comment i'd really appreciate

This was good but i don't like this part of the poem "when I needed to let and cry" i think it should be like When i needed to hold you and you were there for me when i needed to cry. Something like that instead of what you got but anyway keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Very good thanks for your comments i really appreciate them 5/5

Now we're getting somewhere. =)

Nice job.

My favourite lines were:

"I made a lot of mistakes,
Some only you would forgive,
But even through all the pain,
you wanted our love to live."

Kudos to you, M'dear.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Just having someone who is there for you is great, I lost my best friend a month ago, She didn't die, but she is dead to me now. I miss her. (But shhhh don't tell)
JJx