FANTASTIC! it's so beautiful. really really sad, but truly beautiful. another one which made me want to burst into tears. brilliantly written! omg. i am speechless. i really dont know what to say. but it was great. so beautiful. :'(
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*sniff sniff* soooo sad yet sooooo good! the similes and metaphors rock lucy. especially like the idea of 'an echo of an echo'. thats really cool! *sniff sniff*

Wow you really, really have talent. That had real emotion and real meaning. You're becoming a fav. Keep it up! Thanks for all the comments on mine =)

Excellent job -- consider posting it on the artistic poetry contest located on this discussion board and feel free to critique my work

I like your poems although some are hard to understand! And most of them are dark poems and if you've ever read anything of mine then you know that it's not my thing! You good at what you do though so don't change your style!

5/5 hun. This is an emotional one, & Ireally felt it. Thankyou. xx

Yet another poem that makes me want to cry, but so gentle and sad that i love it to pieces.

Spectacularly delivered and deeply, viscerally, emotionally, poetically, moving....
The entire piece fairly sparkles..