Ok love it!I love it! i dont know...if i ahve to put somehtiong.....idkger noele says she feles like something there is kinda missing but its great anyway! ok pleez check out innocent and old movie critizism please!!!!

Wow!!!!! ger, i love it....so deep! very well written! good job!

Very, very nice poem. I loved the structure and I love the words that you used. They go perfect with the title. scratching, running, struggling. You totally captured desperation. Great job! Oh, and by the way, thanks for the comments on my poem. It really meant alot:)

Wow that was good i liked it keep it up!!!!!! xoxo laura

OMG GERRA that was so good i loved it keep up all those good poems.