Latley

by jessica   Sep 15, 2005


Latley it seems your eyes have been pondering
My hearts been wondering
Do you still feel the same or has everything you been telling me just game
Has your heart taken another direction
Cause lately I haven't shown you affection
When I turn around your not there, but you have an illusion I don't care
I guess you feel she's the shit now
All of a sudden I'm not not it
Theres no need to try and change your mind, but in the long run I 'll always consider you mine

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    I REALLY LOVE THIS ONE NICE FLOW BABE.

    RITE SOME MORE I WANT TO READ MORE FROM U.

    I KNO U LOVE POETRY .. =]

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenSoul

    Yer thats true, I agree.. You gotta get rid of that word cause your acount could get suspended or whatever..
    That's a very good poem
    Just a tip *Try to put in some spaces to make it look longer, It gives a finishing touch*
    5/5 Well done
    Keep it up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    It was a good poem, but just so you know you maybe should change the cuss word to sh** or something because you could get introuble with this website if its not under profanity... believe me... i've told someone I agree'd with them and they tried to kick me off of here, but it was a good poem, i'd like to see one of your poems that doesn't rhyme, you never know you might even write better poetry when its not rhyming, but still great poem, i liked it, 5/5

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