It was a good poem, but just so you know you maybe should change the cuss word to sh** or something because you could get introuble with this website if its not under profanity... believe me... i've told someone I agree'd with them and they tried to kick me off of here, but it was a good poem, i'd like to see one of your poems that doesn't rhyme, you never know you might even write better poetry when its not rhyming, but still great poem, i liked it, 5/5

Yer thats true, I agree.. You gotta get rid of that word cause your acount could get suspended or whatever..
That's a very good poem
Just a tip *Try to put in some spaces to make it look longer, It gives a finishing touch*
5/5 Well done
Keep it up!!

I REALLY LOVE THIS ONE NICE FLOW BABE.

RITE SOME MORE I WANT TO READ MORE FROM U.

I KNO U LOVE POETRY .. =]

5/5