Oh my, this has a great twist! I really enjoyed it! great flow and idea! wow great poem if I do ssay so my self x)

Aww i lyk dat 1 its nice keep up the gud wrk

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WOW good job I like it alot!!!!!!!!

Aww..this is a really good poem.

This is so heartbreaking and sweet all at the same time. Nice piece