Nice rhythmn

I really liked this poem also. I mean this poem so reminded me of like fall time and halloween in a odd way because i mean to me it's like the maple trees and everything. That brought back memories and stuff. Amazing job. Oh and the pancakes reminded me of halloween because my aunt comes up during that time because it's her fave. holiday and we go out and eat pancakes in the morning. I just wanted to say thanks for bringing back those memories and also this poem reminded me like that old man lives in the maple tree and he loves being there like we love being at home. amazing job once again keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

That is really random and really good in a very odd way :) i like the elements of nature you have blended and i like the way you include all three things mentioned when you conclude it,

Good job,

--Lenny

LOL, this is nice! Short and two the point, it has a sing-song feeling to it. Short and sweet!

What a *sweet*, refreshing tale.....

Save this especially for children......

I think this is an excellent write. Short and to the point. Very powerful and sweet.
I loved it and so did my little sister.
Thank you for sharing this.
David