It makes me really sad *which i like*!! reminds me of hurricane katrina! i like it!!

Nice flow....5/5

When i read this i thought about hurricane katrina. i don't know if that's what it's about but that wa sthe first thing that came to my mind. Anyway it's a great piece.

Marvellous write, very compelling.

You write with so much empathy, I admire your ability to do that very much.

Kisses
Hayley