Not Bad. It Adds Meaning But Not To Obvious. Nothing To Add, Good Work. *****

+Lone Soul+

You know...I cry for everything, I'm a cry baby (lol)...great poem it almost made me cry! :-) Great job tho. keep it up and nice poem! GREAT POEM.

Dunno really what to say.. its very different, alot of great imagry.. some lines seemed out of place or forced but all in all, I really liked it