Did it have to be cancer?

by Avrii Monrielle   Sep 16, 2005


Did you have to die
Even if everything was at your feet
You make me cry
Now life don't seem sweet

Don't let me know
Don't let me know
That you didn't survive
You're not alive

You're always in my memory
Because time shows

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Nice work.. only thing I'd suggest is altering this line a little to...

    "Now life dont seem SO sweet"
    or
    "Now life dosnt seem so sweet"

    either way.. its just an idea...

    btw.. I just used capitals so you could see what I added.....

  • 19 years ago

    by Spitfire

    I like that poem
    its really good

    but who is it about ?

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