Only 18
by shawn hoskins Sep 16, 2005
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He had his whole life in front of him he was only 18,fell into the wrong crowd started drinking not caring about a thing,then one day he decided to take his bike for a stroll,he held the gas down as he started to go,no one said anything they were to drunk to care,that was the last time they'd see him alive,as he took off with one last stare. |
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16 years ago
Sad but moving
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18 years ago
by Natalie
Aww, That sad. =[ Great poem though.. But maybe if you put them into stanza's.. And put more depth into it.. It could be even better. But.. I still liked it =] 5/5
`natalie xx -
19 years ago
~*Aww sweetie im so srry if thats about someone you kno..but that was great i loved it it was very deep keep up he great work*~ XoXo
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19 years ago
by nikki
Im really sry about that but good poem i love it. but agiain im sry bout ur friend
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19 years ago
This is sad.. but it happens more then anyone would think.. well done
