This is a really good one...like your work

Amazing poem. I loved the wording.
5/5 none to less. take care [always]]

xx::

*> : PainOfOne

EXCELLENT POEM. Keep writing, I want more!

Amazing poem

xXx

Wow... this is a really kool poem...great job!

A truly delightful poem!! i enjoyes reading this very much!!

This was another dark amazong poem! i loved the flow, and wow, it waws long but it keeps the reader, going on and on

Hey great poem! I really like the 2cd last stanza:
I write my feelings
through this pen
understand the meanings
of my world within
Great Job, 5/5 , love
~she Died Screaming

I really enjoy all of your work I have read so far.
You have so much talent, and I honestly can't find anything bad to say about any of them.
As always, I loved this one too.

Wow this poem packs a punch
loved it!

Wow, wow and again, wow. This piece is written with such imagination and creativity, you totally amaze me with this poem. The imagery in it is incredible, so vivid, I could feel like I was there all the time. The atmosphere in every stanza is created greatly, and this poem has so many hidden meanings to me, truly deep. You showed your talent through this powerful piece.
My favorite stanza is:

-Me? An angel of fire
an angel of a liar
the most darkest one
step on earth and last to come...
from the gates of hell-

You deserve more then 5/5 for this one.

The imagery in this piece was amazing, so vivid, I could picture it in my head. The flow was great as well. Very powerful read. 5/5

marcella