by Ann Stareyes
JJ, |
by Chelsey
Oh wow I loved this poem.....I think I would want my privacy and to live my own life..then again I don't know if I'd ever want my daddy to let me go..I'd always want his protection, yet I'd want his support in living my own life..Wonderful poem JJ I really loved reading this! |
Absolutley amazing. You conveyed the bond in which the father and daughter had; and it showed in the poem the extent the father loved his girl. So well done - I loved it :) |
Wow, that was beautiful, you are very talented, this is an excellent poem, this poem is soo true, and you're absolutely right, about how dad's need to let go and everything, and daddy's lil gurl, i quit being daddy's lil gurl some years ago. i'd rather have my life to myself, along with my privacy, which he does not give! it's too complicated to explain. but my parents are always out, and left me in the care of my granda day after day. and daddy's lil gurl-left and moved on. daddy's lil gurl got tired of waiting. excellent poem 5/5 |
by †JustAriâ€
Dammit, i've been crying all day from previous poems i've read. I've just STOPPED when i decided to come and read your work. |
by Jacklyn
I love this poem, it's so sweet and holds a great bond between a father and daughter. i am though mostly closer to my mother simply because she is eaiser to talk to but i still love my dad dearly. wonderful write, truely beautiful. |
I love this poem,,,,strong message,, |
by Candice
This is a beautiful poem |
by Bill Turner
JJ you are an awesome writer. I love to read your stuff. This one is incredible. |
by BeeBeeGun
JJ beautiful poem |
by Ana Vidovic
WOW I GOT SHIVERS!!! YOU ARE AMAZING, THE WAY U WORDED THIS IS BRILLIANT!! this seriously sounds like something we would read and comment on in english class. Again, ur so talented and your words are heaven-sent! |
by Ashley
AWWWWWW! that's so awesome......I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes!!!!! WOW!!! |
by Ashley
AWWWWWW! that's so awesome......I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes!!!!! WOW!!! |
by Ashley
AWWWWWW! that's so awesome......I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes!!!!! WOW!!! |
by Michelle
Such an amazing poem. my dad didnt let me go.. i had to let him do tho =[.. 5/5 |