Blood Sucker

I really like this one too...5/5 Great job! You have talent...ill be waiting to read more!
Becky
xoxo

I actually really liked this one alot, I got nothing negative to say about it, it was well written and kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time, while reading it, I think you did a great job, 5/5

*Claps* I really loved this. It took the form a vampire story, and me being how I am, I love vampires. It flowed wonderfully, so don't pay attention to anyone who rated you lower than a 5. They're just jealous. ;)_

Sheena

This was awsome....so deep....you do so good at showing emotions....especialy since you really arnt feeling it...it is kinda weird....but i loved it haha that just shows how weird i am....sorry i'd love to say something bad about it....make it feel like im acutally saying something....but i cant...i think it was pretty much perfect from whati can see 5/5

Throughout this poem, it seems as if you don't stay grounded...Kindof like you go from one opinion to the other and mix them together...It's almost like you didn't set yourself a guideline for the poem at all...You know what I mean kinda...I give it a 4/5...I give you the four for the plain fact of the benefit of doubt, that maybe I just didnt see your reasoning....I normally would have given it a 3 but, benefit of the doubt, maybe I'm just to dumb to understand
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