Good on u, u rock. i knew you could do it!!!! never Give Up!!!! WE LOVE YOU!!!

luv

Egor

Hey dont commit suicide its a waste of your talent. your poems are amazing and just because ppl beat an hurt you it doesnt mean u have 2 commit suicide to be free, just continue writing and then ull be free. 5/5 pm me if u want

Omg that was a wicked poem , but im glad you decided not to do it ,dont let depression take over your life.let your life beat depression.Im glad your now okay and i hope you always will be.The poem made me cry so much and you have so much talent.You could be famous one day.I used to slit my wrists because of my depression but i didnt let it beat me.Dont let depression beat you
your strong girl!
if u ever wanna talk heres my email
sarahhharrhy@hotmail.co.uk
sarah xxxxxxxxx

I read this poem, and at first I thought it was beautifuly dark, then I read the bit where you were going on the 23 of Sept. which happens to be today! I was like ohmigod, she's killing herself today! I was so glad when I read at the bottom that you'd changed your mind! So all the best of wishes to you, and thank you so much for holding out. Courage.

Hey im really galde you decieded against this choice. That was the best for you. I know it seems like dieing is the best thing sometimes but its really not there r so many ppl that care about you and as you see people on this site even care even if they dont know you i already care and i know only this poem that you have wrote but i will be reading more im me if you want

Aww hunni,

as i read that poem
the first thing that came to mind
omg plz dont let her go
may it be peace she'd find
its true that life can be hard
but so can it be great
plz think about all the people who are there for you
a great more years is all you have to wait
then, when it is finally time
when it's time to go
you'll go with all ur friends
and that's when peace you'll know

i hope ur OK now.. i never believed in suicide and i hated its quick answer to all miserable questions.. im glad u found the friends and the strength in u to decide to stay.. i dunno if u realize how one person can make a BIG difference in the world, starting with the lives of their friends.. and ur definitely no exception.. i know that i dont know u that much, but i do know that u are a person, a sensitive human with feelings and emotions and most of all, a big heart and an amazing talent, and nothing can ever take that away from u..
hold on sweetie..
im so proud of u
take care
nannoush

Wow.this poem amde me cry..and that aint usual for me. im glad that your staying tho.

This is an awesome poem!!!!!!! it is so much like my life but we just need to be strong and hold on.

Im not goint to say i understand how u feel, cus i dont. But i do feel ur pain, if i were in ur place id probly think the same thing, but ur stronger than that. Just deciding u werent going to go thru wit it shows me that you have so much courage, ur a fighter. U have to stay, never give up. KEEP UR HEAD UP.

Wow you've opened up my eyes as the tears i cry stream down my face. I have depression too, so I can relate to the thoughts and feelings from thatpart of you. I would really like to talk to you so maybe I can understand a bit more about this stupid disease. Please reach out and talk to someone and that someone can be me.

You have so much more to live for.
you will learn that when you fall down, you gain wisdom when you learn to pick yourself up and walk again.. i also suffer from depession...I was sexually abused by my step-grandfather for 4 years and beaten by him. My mom's an alcohoic and i watched the one person that i loved with all my heart be turned into this wilting flower dying of lung cancer. And i lived in foster care for 4 1/2 years. i have 2 or three suicidial friends and i couldn't bear to lose them and i may not know you but i know what your going through and it is hard. And yeah, the pain never really goes away...but after awhile you learn to push it away and move on...deaths not the way... that's the easy way out of life but if you can stand up one day in front of a crowd and say that you held on and pushed yourself to the point where you thought you couldn't go on but you did anyways...now that's true courage and true purity.
i wish that maybe you'll get something out of what i've said....ooo and by the way i'm 15 years old.......

It must be hard to have lived your live. But evvery life is worht living. Im glad that uv decided not to leave. It was a really great poem, it made me realise that there is people out there that suffer more then me and they have lived through. im looking forward to reading more of ur touching poems

Im glad for your smart dissition trust me its the right one

Heeeey. don't do it. dont ever, ever ever ever x a billion do it. you'll get better. trust me. i did. i love your poem. keep it up. --me

Omg you r so strong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i was so sad because i actually thought you were going to do it i said you were strong and you are. your a great girl and im sooo glad you decided to stay although you have been through a lot i believe in you girl!!! you have alot of courage and strength to hold on like you have. after i read your poem i was shaking hard out and (for a strong girl like me) i was actually crying!!! keep hanging on!!!! you go girl!!

I loved your poem...actually I love all of the poems on here. I could never write as good as you do. I'm sorry about Stephanie.

I am so glad that uve decided to stay.....it would be so hard for me to no that u have gone ur poems have helped me realize there are better things in life....if u ever need to talk im here for u always will be!!! keep strong.....hold on tight and never let go u can do this

xoxo, allie

You are welcome...and i feel sorry for you for having to go through this in your teens...you know...this poem is great is just that it's not very well done...i might correct the sentences for you but it's too long so i hope you will read it again and make it better cause it doesn't seem so right...here's a few sentences you can start with...

There she sits so helpless(ly)

Scarlet scars upon her wrists
Tell of all the times
She tried to go but something
Stopped her suicidal crimes
...i think you should correct this sentence...doesn't seem right to me...maybe adding some words...

Stay stong, thats not really much more I can say becuse i acctually can't see what your going thro(emontionly) Just smile, even if its fake, it might make u feel better

-x-MEAGAN-x-

Its a good thing you changed your mind, your shouldnt commit suicide, you have such a great life ahead of you, and your such and amazing poet,
Loev always,
Elissa