Comments : R.I.P. To Me

  • 19 years ago

    by Denise

    I'm so happy, your not going. I know we've never talked or anything, but I know I'm your biggest fan. I love all your poems. My bestfriend committed suicide too, so I know how you feel.
    XOXO-DENISE

  • 19 years ago

    by Iflookscouldkill

    Hey girlie keep holding onto yourself,God works in mysterious ways,he will help you.I love you(even though you don't know me)awesome poem though

  • 19 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    Im not gona say i understand, cz thts patronizing, however, i am gonna say tht i hav a vague idea wot ur goin thru, n i empathize as far as i can without knowing details.

    brilliant poem, i really like this bit,

    Mascara tears leak from her eyes
    And stain her pale, white face
    Trailing down her satin cheeks
    Depression's line they trace

    keep ritin, n btw, im really glad ur staying, it means we hav more amazing poems like this :)

    xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by kayla

    Wow that was so sad. very emotional. please dont do it. im here if you need to talk

  • 19 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    Hey, plz dont go there are some problems i agree i have many more than appear, but teh world needs fabulous talent like urs so STAy. plz leave a comment on mine . NAtalie

  • 19 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    You are such a wonderful poet i am so glad that you decided not to die
    that world isnt ready for you to leave yet
    you have such talent, it would be a shame to waste it
    this was yet another great poem written by you!
    i loved the emotion

  • 19 years ago

    by Leona

    WOW very powerful you have alot of talent once again.. I love all of your work and reading it helps me alot thank you!!!!!!
    Love Leona

  • OMG this is so sad but such a GREAT GREAT POEM!!! i cried .. wow i'm sorry about everything you just have an amazing way with words to write everything down the way u do is amazing and i truly admire it deeply. I love your work and i'll keep reading and leave you my comments ... You have a deep and touching way with words ... Good Luck .. but keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    Aww thats good. I too am trying to hold on. But anywho I love this poem. Very powerful and i love the flow of the words.

    Savannah.

  • 19 years ago

    by ::bRITTANy::

    Omg! im sitting here crying!! look i dont know you, and im not going to pretned to know how you feel... because i thought my life was bad! This is something most ppl just dont want to here. but im gonna say it anyways... Ppl will ALWAYS fail you. no matter how much they say BFF or whatever things always change and their gone. Theres only one person who can heal those scars, pain, and memories. and thats Jesus Christ. You shoudl Chech out AcquireTheFire.com please dont think im preaching to you. But i dont even know you and i love you!!!! Your an extremely strong person!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    I'm sorry about all of the shit youve had in your life. I know i cant exactly relate to your problems but im really glad youre staying.

    -x- a.b.b.i -x-

  • 18 years ago

    by demongoddess120

    I've felt pain like this, it's hard to really live after such things. sometimes i've thought about dieing, but then theirs the people that made me, me. so i thank my sis, my cousin, and friends for giving me reasons to live. i just hope you'll keep on trying to live, becouse ounce you find a reason for life, it'll become easier, i promise.

  • 18 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    Wow..not only did the poem touch me, but ur final words at the end..you are trully a strong servivor and giving up should be the last thing on your mind..think about how far you made it..now the path is endless..do not give up on yourself! be strong..be you!..*with love, elisa-marie*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nella Heartbreaker.

    This is one of my favorite peoms that you have writen. its good to here that uyour staying.

  • 18 years ago

    by asf

    Great poem!!! wow it is deep and very very touching!!! i don't know what to say i am speachless
    ! its a good thing that you decided to stay! i really want to get to know u so hit me up at SHADOWWETWETWET@YAHOO.COM stick in there and keep your head up!

  • 18 years ago

    by EmUhLee

    Totally feel you girl, it seems like life aint worth living. but it is and im really happy for you. you're life is changing for the best. your a wonderful person. 5/5 on all poems♥

  • 18 years ago

    by newlun

    Your poems are amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Wow this is really good and sad...i love cutting to..it comforts me

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    Personaly i think your way better than bob shank. you have perfect flow on yours poems. your a great writer. 5/5++

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    This is another good poem. i really like how u write. and im still very sorry for everything that you go through everday.