*tear slides down cheek...* i seriously tried to kill myself and trust me im betta now....
love you always brandi dumencic

I love all your poems! your a great writer

Its good you decided to stay... I am happy... Your poems are really good... keep up the good job

Antonia Palomo

Its great....i love your poems. they are honest and true...

OMG IM SOO HAPPY UR STAYIN IT MAKES ME ALMOST BAWL .. :( when i read the first para pgragh at the bottom i wanted to cry .. holdon tight ! iknow u can make through another day!! stay strong!!

OMG IM SOO HAPPY UR STAYIN IT MAKES ME ALMOST BAWL .. :( when i read the first para pgragh at the bottom i wanted to cry .. holdon tight ! iknow u can make through another day!! stay strong!!.. by the way ur an AWESOME poet .. i only could dream of writin like u .. im addin ur to my Favorites!!

Omg .... your such a good writer. honey you need to make this a profession, u made me cry im still crying! i know u prolley dont like people to feel bad for you, but i do and im sorry that i do. im glad that u changed your mind. and im a fan of your work i dont just give this a rate of 5 i give it 1000
love,
chey

I know im a person you might not know
I know im a person you might not care
But let me tell you this
You poses something great that you should share
I know times been very hard
I know you dealt with so much shyt that you cried and cried
Even cut your own wrist
Blood pouring out
But never cared
Never remorsed
Some say that its stupid and g@y
Not knowin how it felt
How it felt to control your own pain
And not let it control you
Baby i know u thought it a lot through
But i also went with so much shyt like you
Almost raped, abandoned by own mother, givin to father
Under complete lock, mind confused with terror
Boys try to take advance, beat, slapped and b_tched
Never understood by anyone
Not friends, not family
Still i try to make the best
I know i cant say i love you
Since i too dnt know you
But i appreciate your life
And wish the real bad b_tches dead
Try to take all the bad stuff outta your head
Sooner or later, you\\\\\\\'ll meet the person that will give you love like i did

TAKE CARE SWEETI

I know im a person you might not know
I know im a person you might not care
But let me tell you this
You poses something great that you should share
I know times been very hard
I know you dealt with so much shyt that you cried and cried
Even cut your own wrist
Blood pouring out
But never cared
Never remorsed
Some say that its stupid and g@y
Not knowin how it felt
How it felt to control your own pain
And not let it control you
Baby i know u thought it a lot through
But i also went with so much shyt like you
Almost raped, abandoned by own mother, givin to father
Under complete lock, mind confused with terror
Boys try to take advance, beat, slapped and b_tched
Never understood by anyone
Not friends, not family
Still i try to make the best
I know i cant say i love you
Since i too dnt know you
But i appreciate your life
And wish the real bad b_tches dead
Try to take all the bad stuff outta your head
Sooner or later, you\\\\\\\'ll meet the person that will give you love like i did

TAKE CARE SWEETI

OMG!! this is such as sad poem!! I am soo sorry that all of this has happened to you!! I am glad that you stayed strong through it all and decided to stay!! You are an amazing writer and if you need to talk to anyone you can always talk to me!! and i know that everyone else on this sight will be the same way!!
Love,
Steph

OMG!! this is such as sad poem!! I am soo sorry that all of this has happened to you!! I am glad that you stayed strong through it all and decided to stay!! You are an amazing writer and if you need to talk to anyone you can always talk to me!! and i know that everyone else on this sight will be the same way!!
Love,
Steph

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I have tears in my eyes this is just what i feel i'm a cutter 2 i was 9 when i started to cut im now 16 i have been in hospital 10 times and had 4 blood tranfusions coz of all the blood i lost i would like 2 talk2 more plz email me i_am_gizmo@hotmail.co.uk and plz be happy im so soz u had a hard life nd i no u wont believe me coz i never belived ne1 but have so much to live for. for everfin in your future marriage kids ect and dnt et the bastards win your better than that.MazieX

Omg...that is so sad..but true! i am so happy that you have been able to get past all the depression and beating and suicide and try to live your life. if you ever wanna talk just email me...

I like a lot this poem,it's amazing!!You managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a really good work.You are a great poet XxXx Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle 5/5 for sure XxX

That poems left me speechless.

Best I have ever read in my life.

Your poems are inspiring me to hold on and be strong. i kno how hard that is. <333

Omg that's so sad

I know exactly what yew feel.I read this poem and I saw everything that yew said was about me also.But I learned but not very good that killing urself isn't the answer.One of mii best friend's friend had the same problem.except her dad wans't in jail.she snuck out and shot herself in the club house that was in the woods.I didn't learn very well b/c i still do everything.I go through alott in mii life too.but i liked the poem.and was very good!

Huni

ive been through the same thing

i almost comitted suicide a couple times.
and i stayed and im happy i did
or i would never have the one
person i need in my life(my boyfriend)

really good hun.