The words and structure is beautiful. Nice piece.

Hey, great poem, i really liked it. you have a lot of talent. thanks for commenting on mine.

>> Tear Stained Face

Yet another amazingly written poem. You have such a talent for writing down your thoughts and feelings. I understand how you feel completely, it's so weird. And keep up the great work...I put you one my favourites list :P...and thanks for all your comments, it means a lot. Take Care. Luv Nicole =)

Noo hunni..you have to stay strong..PM me or something i wnat to help you...really your soo talented and i know you will have a great future just ahng on there like i am...great poem

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