Eek. i have a headache at the moment, and reading this didnt help. The imagery you've created is so real, and i feel so chlostrophbic and ill! very good poem tho. scarily realistic.

This is such a good poem lu! i love the way its really different from your others and the way you can really feel the things you write about and it really makes you feel uncomfortable! yet again more proof that you're without doubt the best writer i know!