by fallentears Sep 16, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Because I thought you'd be there |
by Jason Meres
Seems like it could be added to, lines are a bit abrubt, but well formed in themselves, and well written besides. |
by Truest Lies
Ouch, that's sad. But it rang with a certain truth...that sounded nice. |
Very very good poem. |
by Erica
You are really a good writer but i think you should make a good suprising ending |