Comments : Because i thought.....

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica

    You are really a good writer but i think you should make a good suprising ending

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very very good poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Ouch, that's sad. But it rang with a certain truth...that sounded nice.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Seems like it could be added to, lines are a bit abrubt, but well formed in themselves, and well written besides.