I won't fold

by Zer0riginZ   Sep 16, 2005


Truth be told,
truth be told...
This story has gotten old,
try to change me...
I won't FOLD!!!
You'll just have to see...

I refuse to bend!
I'll take this all the way...
Into the bloody end!
I'm not your prey!

Tell me everything,
I wanna hear...
Treat me like a king,
its my life you steer!

Truth be told,
truth be told...
As I get old,
I won't change,
I won't HOLD!
Lost all range...
So truth be told...

Don't change me,
change yourself,
I'd like you to see,
if I want,
I'll change myself...

So truth be told...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WHOA! I love this! All too often people try to mold others into what fits them best...I love the message within this piece....You must stand up for yourself and stay who you are..be true to yourself. ...so excellently written...

    The CLAM! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Well done, buddy. My favourite lines are:

    "Don't change me,
    change yourself,
    I'd like you to see,
    If I want,
    I'll change myself."

    I have a friend who is constantly pressing for his ex-girlfriend to change for the better, but she's really the best she can be. This is good, Andrew.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

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