Loss of time

by goddessofsong   Sep 16, 2005


How can i explain
the pain
the heartache
when \"nothing is wrong\"?
but something is dead
and as i lay in my bed,
the tears come
and i feel the loss overwhelming me
the years flew,
when we were strong and true
where and when and WHY?
don\'t you remember?
when you were my rock
and i was your confidante
change came before i knew,
leaving me so confused
it\'s gone,
how could it come back
i was a fool to hold on this long
time...the never ending love song

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem 5/5 thanks for your comment sarah x

  • 19 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow i liked that it reminds me of somethings and yeah really good me likey me likey lol well keep it up great job xoxo me fred lolxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Ali

    Wow thats sad..nice job..to give you advice...i think the 'something is dead' line sounds a little too much like ya just put it there to ryhme with the next line, and it seems to make sense bu those two lines dont make that much sense..like i had this vision of some dead animal in your bed lol..sorry way to totally ruin it huh>? well i really liked it anyway good job keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by mayme

    WONDERFULL!! I love it. It reminds me of me and my sister, we have grown apart some.

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