WONDERFULL!! I love it. It reminds me of me and my sister, we have grown apart some.

Wow thats sad..nice job..to give you advice...i think the 'something is dead' line sounds a little too much like ya just put it there to ryhme with the next line, and it seems to make sense bu those two lines dont make that much sense..like i had this vision of some dead animal in your bed lol..sorry way to totally ruin it huh>? well i really liked it anyway good job keep it up!

Wow i liked that it reminds me of somethings and yeah really good me likey me likey lol well keep it up great job xoxo me fred lolxox

Great poem 5/5 thanks for your comment sarah x