Daydream

Totally cool!!! Well written 2!!!

Wonderful!! really enjoyed it...sometimes these short poems makes everything so simple..as if we have been fool thinking for so many years...four lines lke this and here is the solution in front of u crystal clear!!

lovely work dear.....day before yesterday only i wrote my first short poem...& i hv realized that the more shorter it is..more meaningful it becomes...just my thought!! well take care and all the best...

I loved it, so simply put but the emotion was so tangible...Thank you for your comment, if I haven't aleady said, and if I have then double thanks!
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*VioletRaven*

Great piece.Short and simple but it says so much.Excellent rhyme scheme.This strikes a chord in me and I can really relate.And I like how it is somewhat ambiguous, it can mean so many things.I see it as the sadness love sometimes becomes.Really great poem.

Wow.This is a great piece.It is simple and brief yet says so much, it captures the angst of a lost love in so few words.I can really relate to poems of love and loss(check my own stuff)and this really touched me.A really excellent piece!