I think this poem could be a little more descriptive about who the character Edward Scissorhands actually was, but i'm thinking if you did write more about Edward Scissorhands, that the poem would go off topic. I watched that movie just a few days ago, and i have to say, you summed it up very nicely. :)

//Ari\\

//Ari\\

I can't believe i signed my signature twice...haha.

//Ari\\

That was sweet, based on the movie, isnt it? Very nice, though. The language was simple and nice.

Good Writing!
beth.

P.S. as I promised to try harder at giving longer comments, I'll say that the story could have been longer, perhaps based a little more on Edward's life, but if you were aiming on basing it on his and Kim's love then you did very well.
the best of luck in the future, really!