Oh I liked this. I don't know why, but it was so simply stated, yet, it was still... different. An Ice Maiden, a subject than can fit into love, sadness, yet you've given it a ghoulish face. A very nice effort... i really enjoyed its flow, too!

Well done! it's creative and different. yet there is not a lot of words to discribe her and the reader can still understand the power of it. well done.

~Jacklyn

I think if you gave her more description in looks and just why she is doing the things she does the poem would have more power behind it. Plot121