Great job beautifull and full of heartache keep up the good work!

Wonderful poem, lots of meaning, so heart-felt. I really like it. Kind of realates to me and my ex. ^^

I really wanna see you do a real form not just free verse, i dunno if it's just these two poems i read but both of them were like this and free verse is good but i think youd do good with a more strict form too...anyways i liked this and i didnt at the same time i kinda felt like it didn't get the whole emotion i dunno maybe im weird lol imma go with a 5/5 cause it was well written and it's missing something i think but i can't figure it out so good job

Oh so sad...
im sure he'll be back..
he'll love u again...
stay happy
trust & hope !
nice poem
5/5
love
amy