Wow Jess, very emotion filled. It was a really good poem, it doesn't suck. keep up the awsome work. |
It dosent suk this is a very deep poem. |
It doesnt suck it's really good. |
by CHOKE
OMFG!!!!!!!!!! Babe i loved this poem, but it nearly left me in tears. im alwayz gonna be here for u sweets, so remember that!!!!!5/5!!!!! |
This is a great poem!, keep up the good work. look forward to reading more, amie |
Great poem... Consistancy is great... |
Hey hun REALLY GREAT POEM 5/5! luvin it! keep writing ur great at it, im here4 u! luvinK u always....if u need someone 2 talk 2 im here! luv maddison! |
by Becca
~wow how can ya think tht sucked! tht was so cool with such emotion u have such talent!~ 5/5 |
Wow one of your best definatly keep writin u hav talent check out some o my new poems if u want i think there better than b4 |
by Pilar
Brilliant, i loved it |
by SethM
Great poem. I can feel the conflict within your character. How she struggles with how she is and how she hates what she is but her inner-self sees her and is disappointed with what she's done. |
by xX-jess-Xx
This dusnt suck! its well good! im lovin it, keep it up hun 5/5. jesxxx |
by angie A
I really enjoyed reading this poem it's very unique!! i really liked it.5/5 |
by ASPHYXIATED
Omg, this is so sad :( |