by Michael D Nalley Sep 17, 2005
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
We break laws we must atone |
by Jacklyn
Your an impressive writer! second peice and i'm still amazed! it's really a great poem with great meaning. another job well done! |
by HJ
Again another powerful read, very compelling and intriguing. |
by lisa marie
Strong message. Great Flow. It's just overall a very good poem. |
I dont quite understand this one...but dont take that to offence b/c im not very educated when it comes to god...and i kinda stoped liking him so much kinda recently....but i can tell that this has a lot of talent in it .....so great job...5/5 |
I Love Poems Like This! Even Though I Suck At Writing Them, I'm Very Impressed With Your Poetry And I'm Blown Away With This Poem 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |