Hey i dont know how it sounds, but how i said it in my head, i think it would be better like this

Take me away
take me away from the pain.....
Take me away
take me away before i go insane.....
Take me away...i cant fight the pain.

or widout the last take me away

sup 2 you, sounds gr8 anywayz

love mark xxx

I love the chorus part, just hope someone will take me away now too, to somewhere no one knows just like the lake isle of innisfree.

I love this one, its Realy good.
i hope you get the beat and all taht for it.
XX Tigger