Hey, thanks for your comment on my poem and no i don't mind lol.
I really like this poem, it's really creative and different to the other poems i've read.
xxx cici xxx

I like the way u write..plz do write one 4 me...if ya wanna ... lol

Amazing job. I really enjoyed this one really amazing job i never read a poem like this. I mean this is really creative. I really enjoyed it. There was nothing wrong with it. I love the concept of using the spider and the spider webs. Amazing job once again. i loved it. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. Ps. thanks for the comment.

It's a great poem...lo unico que me pregunto es el por que este poema es tan triste...todos tus poemas son muy buenos, really all of them are good, but they're so sad! uh...disculpa my spanglish but I got used to it (lol) Nice poem tho. 5/5 Take care and thank you for your comments

Ah! Okay....I love the metaphorical value in a "web of lies" such as a spider's web. How well you approached that life, death, pain, love, and dismay are all held within the same weaving patterns. Different contributions to the same "big picture". Absolutely brilliant!
Great write,
Christa