Hey hun, very cool and sweet poem! even though heaven means nothing to me compared to you.I love you so much.
Love Becca xxx

Awww...thats so nice. It discribs how you feel so well. and its great! Its easy to read with out rhyme I liked it alot well done :D

I LOVED THIS POEM! I wish I could write as good as u do! Read my poems sometime and tell me what u think of them!!

~Syd

Aww wheres my poem??? lol jk .. hehe well .. i surly do write well ttyl hunni keep up the writing xoxoxoxo
Love Crystal
( hope u and Becca last 4eva )

Bet you have all the girls swonning about your words, keep up the good work Elise

Hmmm...im not sure about this one.i like some of the words you have used in it though, adds great affect..

"In a cloud-carried tomorrow."

octoberxx