Wow, amazing. Loved it a lot!
Keep 'em coming, you've got lost of talent! 5.5 Keep it up!

It was amazing! 5.5

Very nicely written. I loved the wording. Nothing but a 5/5 for sure. take care : xx

*> : PainOfOne

Omg this is so freaking awesome!!!

Youre really talented, keep writing, youll only get betta

Is that for brazilin boy

Brill, well done hun=) I really enjoyed it i dont have anything to say so -claps- keep it up:)

thankyou for your comment as well

Pure

I know what you mean!! Boys there so confusing right?? nice job!!

Gd luv ya

AMAZING! I was first captured my the title and the poem was no dissapointment. The ending came as such a pleasant surprise. Loved it! *5/5*

I just want to be friends nothing more
I'm sorry I didn't notice I tore your heart and made it sore
I would shorten the second line to "I'm sorry i didn't notice that your heart i tore" Less syllables , so it enters the flow a little bit better .

Those words still echo in my mind
And now myself I can not even find
Now I try to talk to you but you turn away
I am sorry is all I want to say
Sometimes you look at me with those eyes
No longer do they have honey but hatred and despise

So this is for you
I guess this is the least I can do
I'm so sorry from the bottom of my soul
I hope you can forgive me and finally let go
Cause I have changed and want to go back together
I promise I wont hurt you, not anymore not ever

I love this part . It's so sad , and really almost flawless . But the rest of the poem seemed off flow in a lot of places .. And all your rhymes weren't really the best . It's simply fixed , all you have to do is really sit down and read it over . Good luck , 4/5 .