Ronni baby u kon i love u more than anything in this world girlie!!! and if u do ne thing of that sort ill kick ur little a**...so just kno i love u and that i miss u tons girlie

Aw.. again its beautifully written,

It's so sad, but you should be proud of this; it's a very strong peice and it shows so much emotion.

sammi xxx 5!!!

Again, I love your concept, it feels a little forced in places, but that could be fixed by adding just a few more descriptive words to it. No worries though, you're doing great.

I love this poem alot! theres nothing i can really say except for the last line. it doesn't really fit. it seems..off and out of scheeme. :) but neways, i love the rhyme up till the end, and it was great and full of emotions.

Wow! that was so amazing and sad! 5/5

Wow, i really loved that poem, i could realate so much, i go through the exact same thing with mom. i hate it and it kills me inside
--josh

I thought this poem was amazing, Long, but none the less amazing. My favorite part was
"the pain is great
i want to be numb
the blood smells sweet
dripping down to my thumb"

~Anthony

Wow... that's so sad...
well written though.
take care, xoxoxo

Wow.........
what a powerful poem
im so sad :(
well done
~*MaRy*~

I live with an alcoholic parent as well. I know how you feel. I would recommend you reading a poem I wrote called: "On The Road You Chose To Take." I also would recommend reading the poem I wrote: "Don't Think I'm Not Listening," as well, if you're a cutter as well. I've been cutting since I was thirteen. Your poem reminds me of my own life. I would never EVER want to ever take my life, and if I did, I know I would regret it. And, I know you would too. This isn't truly what you want; what you want is, love, peace, happiness, for her to stop drinking, to show you, she loves you, to hug you, and someone to just support you, accept you for you, and nothing else... And, you deserve EVERY bit of this just like everyone else... I will always be here to listen, if you ever need someone to talk to.

((((((Big hugS))))))

Lots of love,always,

Michelle

That was amazing! so deep! it had so much feeling! Again the only advise I can give is use more ,.! Of those lol. So then the reader can tell when ur starting a new sentence and make them pause, also make sure u capitalize the 1st letter of a new sentence, makes it look prettier lol, and helps the reader know when a new sentence is beginning. 5/5

Well I have one thing to say- This poem has been under-rated! You deserve a 5/5 for this and that is what I have rated it!! =) Welldone and keep the writing coming!

This is really emotianal and sad! Good job!