Swinging to Peace

by goddessofsong   Sep 17, 2005


Back and forth
and back and forth
i swing on that swing
in that play ground of my childhood
back and forth
and back and forth
i feel my troubles drifting off...
but they are just my first troubles.
back and forth
and back and forth
i try to overcome this one,
so i can move on to the next.
back and forth
and back and forth
just a little baby step,
but i must move on now.
back and forth
and back and forth
with each forth i leave some troubles behind,
but back again...back again
back and forth
and back and forth
I'm swinging,
swinging to peace

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dora

    Yeah i really like that gerra and i love how everyone can thik about there times when we were little

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    I liked the vision of swinging back and forth, back and forth. I miss the days when the swings could take away all my troubles. Great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Interesting poem and effective style. I quite like this one you described something and kept moving along the same wave length. Good Job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ali

    Cool nice job gerra i like it..although i do think you said back and forth One to many times lol. but good job all the same i like it

  • 19 years ago

    by mayme

    Very interesting. I love the repetition, it really worked in this poem.

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