Very interesting. I love the repetition, it really worked in this poem.

Cool nice job gerra i like it..although i do think you said back and forth One to many times lol. but good job all the same i like it

Interesting poem and effective style. I quite like this one you described something and kept moving along the same wave length. Good Job!

I liked the vision of swinging back and forth, back and forth. I miss the days when the swings could take away all my troubles. Great job!

Yeah i really like that gerra and i love how everyone can thik about there times when we were little