I like this poem. its the same kind i write for my girlfriend. so thanks for the help, lol. i particularly like the first and sixth stanzers. keep it up. please read mine and tell me your thoughts...and vote please. particularly read one that hasn't been voted for

I loved it. Keep it up.

Nana

I enjoyed reading this poem becase i feel the same way about someone, the only difference is he has a girlfriend and theres nothign we can work towards..i do long for himn to hokd me and to feel his lips against mine but i knoe its nothing but a fantasy..thankyou for writing a poem that i can place myself in and relate to..well written-keep it up

This is really good ! keep it up!

Awww how cute i love this ... its very nice i love the last stanza. i hope the thing between you and him worked out. 5/5

Awwt his is really sweet && sad at the same time. wonderful rythem! great poem. 5/5

Nice peom ^_^ its the best peom i ever read xD write some more xP 10/10

Wow! i absolutely love this.
the last line was amazing!
5/5

xo kisses xo