This is a great poem..you rated mine..so I thought i should look at yours. I can relate to this in a way too. Life is tough...but thats what makes you strong rite?

Hey, thank you for commenting on my poem firstly, and secondly I really like this poem, it has lots of power in it, and it shows me that some people don't deserve forgiveness, but still a really great piece.

Great write. The flow and wording was excellent. I like the end:
There is not a chance
For love is what i lack
Only gave you one small glance
Before i turned my back.
Awesome work. It is very cool and good.
~The Bleeding Child

I love you

Hey! Wow, I loved this poem! It's really well written! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .
*Lisa*

I really love this poem.. The first one too. *sigh*
You write very well..
And remind me of a few things in my past..
I love your poems..
Keep them coming..

XoXo,
Latanya

Love the ending.