Comments : A childs lost love

  • 19 years ago

    by Keira!!!!

    Awwwwwwwww thats so sad!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Oh gosh this is so touching
    so sad, i've had a troubled relationship with my mother, so this really brings it home for me. The last line completely pulls the poem together, well done!!!!

    **smile**