Very good, except towards the end it kinda stoped rhyming and got kinda hard to understand.

:-) wow....another beautiful poem! Great job 5/5 hope to read some more of your great poetry soon! may God bless you and your family and always keep smiling + keep writing too! oh yeah...take care ^_^

Who wouldn't want to be the girl in the poem...of course I can't speak for everyone....Very well done

Wow very good poem, the emoution put across is amazing, good work
take care xxxxx
p.s thanks for the comment on my poem xxxx

Wow...thats all i have to say...u must be one of those romantik vatos...u know i'm right...well once again she is one lucky gurl...5/5...alwayz believe in love