by Lost & Delirious Sep 17, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Every night, I close my eyes, |
Nice poem.Like the flow even though not all the lines rhyme. |
by Britney
Awwl... so romantic... I absolutley loved all the details and it had a great ending nice job! 5/5! |
by Carmen
Aw! that was so sweet, but i never knew May was in summer O.o or maybe im wrong? 5/5 |
A great poem once again. This totally flowed perfectly and just got me daydreaming about the wonders of summer. 5/5 luv jess xoxoxoxox |
by Dahna
Very beautiful poem. And this really hit home because it reminded me of my significant other, while literally bringing tears to my eyes. Thank you very much for sharing that. It was wonderfully written, but together in an amazing and unique flow. I love it! Hope to be seeing more from you. |