Shouldn't dare

Listed in my 'greats'
It had great flow
Great structure
Great words
And a great writer

From the lover to the loved
by Bradley Peter

Every morning i wake
your the first on my mind
I'd swim under a frozen lake
if it was you that I'd find

you mean more that you'll ever know
it's much more than love
your and angel in the snow
and the whitest of a dove

when your not near
i can hardly breathe
and i am filled with the fear
that soon you will leave

I'm more in love than ever
than i ever have been before
but it all depends on whether
you'll let me love you more

my favourite love poem ive read in a long time
im not a great fan of love poems cause mostly they just ramble on about crap but this blew me away.

This poem was really good kinda confusin but i liked it! its amazing how when u read sumtin u can sorta feel what the author feels! great work keep writin!